Novel Synopsis

"The real magic of discovery lies not in seeking new landscapes, but in having new eyes."
–Marcel Proust


Although it's a very good question, possibly the most annoying inquiry an author hears is also the most common: "So, what's the new book all about, anyway?"

Most writers will tell you that if they could summarize their work—an enterprise which often takes years to complete—they wouldn't have bothered writing a novel "about" it. Novels aren't really
about things. They are more like explorations of previously uncharted waters. They hinge on discovery, not invention. I suspect that if anyone took a poll, most writers would say they identify with mariners (say, Magellan) rather than landlubbers who contrive a new device (like Ford).

So the better question for a novelist might be parallel to the one you'd ask Francis Drake or James Cook: "So, where the heck did you go in the new book?" This might provide you with a much more interesting answer than the grimace you're likely to receive from the first question.

Sadly, in order to find publishers for their books, writers have to circulate abstracts of the voyages they've been on. Despite some of the unique work many writers produce, these briefs are pretty standard pieces—a sales pitch—usually no more than a page long, intended to capture the attention of the poor interns assigned to scan the thousands of book proposals most publishers receive annually.

Despite my dismissal of the summary process, I too, have prepared a novel synopsis. Here's the one-pager I sent to my publisher, Turnstone Press, to provide the gist of the narrative.


The Good Lie — Novel Synopsis

16 Chapters; ~ 108,000 words: literary / psychological fiction


As Paul Wakefield paddles his kayak across Mouat Channel toward the Marina Harbour on Vancouver Island, he hears the engine of a yacht as it cuts through the fog toward him. In an instant, the cruiser swamps Paul and the young girl paddling beside him, then disappears into the fog, never to be seen again. Dumped into the winter ocean, the girl panics and submerges Paul in her frenzy to survive. To save them both, Paul smacks her with his paddle — a blow that sends her into a coma and unleashes an unpredictable series of events.

The story moves from the ocean surrounding Victoria, Canada, into the hearts and souls of the characters who struggle to adapt to this utterly senseless accident. Paul Wakefield is in his late 30s, happily married to Valerie Burbank and father to their son, Eliot. Reg and Fran Jensen are the distraught parents of Jenny, the young girl who now lies comatose in a local hospital. Their pleas to Paul for sympathy soon turn into rants and confrontations. Within a few weeks Reg Jensen loses his composure and begins to stalk young Eliot.

When Paul learns that Reg is an ex-con with a record of violence, Reg challenges Paul and Valerie with a series of escalating threats and irrational behaviours. As he cranks up the tension, Paul must rise to the occasion, or collapse under the strain. Barely able to manage himself and protect his family, Paul is dragged toward the harrowing finale by Reg’s overt madness — an act that culminates in a vicious double murder.

More than most psychological thrillers,
The Good Lie has a strong literary flavour and a number of well-drawn minor characters who serve as Paul’s allies. The most notable of these is the real-life Canadian painter, Jack Wise, who provides the spiritual guidance Paul requires. Paul also gathers support from his father-in-law, his aging next-door neighbours and their dog — who becomes the first victim of Reg Jensen’s brutality.

Beneath these currents runs a love story defined by Paul and Valerie’s enduring romance, a bond tested by the events that gradually consume them. Their narrative slips backward in time to explore their relationship through its shifts and turns until we reach the novel’s last paragraphs and the beginning of their affair.

The Good Lie also explores the fluidity of time and one individual’s struggle to contact the essence of universal intelligence in order to find purpose in a world seemingly governed by chaos and destruction. Prayer, meditation and blind belief — all are pressed to deliver some form of redemption. The reader is left to ponder the possibilities that Paul discovers through the course of the novel.